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[ Fanfiction ] The Past and The Present [5]: Who's that ninja? [Rating K+]

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On 2017-03-28 18:09:04Show this Author OnlyDescending Order
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An Update! The mains are growing up so fast and before I knew it the story might be over :o but we still have a long way to go!
Thanks for all the feedback, my friends! It really gives me a warm feelings and motivate me to write :loveliness:
This is the fifth chapter! Grammer might not be accurate; thoughts are most welcome. Enjoy!


“Multi- Shadow Clone Jutsu!”
Crimson cringed as he stared at two of his floppy, grey looking shadow clones as they limp around like jellies before disappearing in a *.

“Ahahahahahahahahha”

He glared at Scarlet, who was laughing his heart out till tears brimmed his eyes. Azure gave a few gentle pats on his back as support.

“Sorry, Crimson but it was just too * funny! You should have seen the look on your shadow clones!”

“Did they even have a look?” Crimson asked bluntly before shaking his head from this whole madness and dramatically crumbled to his knees. “Kami! I’ll never become a genin at this rate.”

“Aw cheer up, Crim. Your shadow clones were way better than Midnight.” Azure said supportively, one hand holding the clipboard of their requirement to pass the incoming exam.

They had been training together since the first time they met at the Acedamy four years ago and it was thanks to the three of them that Crimson was able to get this far. Everything was so difficult for him, but because of Azure’s teaching that made things simple, Scarlet’s guidance in chakra flow and Midnight’s explanations and show of techniques that he was able to be on par with the three of them, who, mind you, had been maintaining perfect score since the start. It was a blessing in disguise.

“My shadow clones are perfectly fine.” Midnight said defensively and Scarlet snickers. “Did you mean, shadow clone? Without the plural because last time I saw, you could only make one shadow clone.”

“And the jutsu is multi-shadow clone, not shadow clone jutsu.” Azure piped in.

Midnight frowned and make the hand sign, puff of smoke appeared but just like the same, only one perfectly replica of Midnight appear.

The boy scowled at this.

“We’re doomed.” Crimson flopped down on the smooth ground and stared up at the clear blue sky. Scarlet’s courtyard was always so tranquil, and this specific courtyard was used for training so they weren’t disturbing anyone with their rowdiness.

“Don’t give up, Crim! You too, Mid.” Azure cheered and Crimson was grateful of her gentle nature. When there weren’t any adults around, Azure was the one that always saved their sorry *s, healing their silly wounds that could have been avoided if they were more careful. She would always sigh, “Boys.” And sometimes they felt guilty too. So they treat her to ice cream after that. It was worth it.

“Middy just needs some more practice on chakra reserve. Crim needs some on technique and concentration so that his clone will be sharper.” Scarlet said as he plopped down on the ground. Midnight huffed dissatisfactory and crossed his arms. “Teach me then, Scarlet. You’re good with chakra.”
“Aw thanks, honey. That's so sweet of you.” Scarlet said teasingly and links his arms with Midnight, leaning against him.

“I saw nothing.” Crimson covered his eyes and they all laughed out loud. Crimson was still confused how the three of them function. They were closed to each other to the point that skinship was normal.

He had seen the three of them taking a bath together, changing clothes together and even cuddling with each other during sleeping .He wonder how Azure feels, since she was the only girl here. Sometimes Crimson gets pulled into this too, during sleepover he felt Scarlet latching on his legs, Azure over his torso and Midnight chin on his head. It was like a sandwich, a loving, family sandwich and Crimson never wanted it to end.

Suddenly, Crimson stomach growled furiously and he knows it was his hunger pangs.
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“Oops, looks like someone hungry~” Azure sing sang and Scarlet grins.

“I heard someone is hungry.” Ibi-san popped his head through the door and grinned at the kids. “Just in time for lunch! Come to the dining room kids.”

“Aye!”

With that, the sound of unsynchronized footstep t*s on the wooden panel as they head into the dining room. Food here at the Blaze compound was always delicious, and the members were friendly too. Crimson knew that Midnight and Azure had a rough start in life, so he was glad that the two could finally find happiness here. Crimson knew they were happy now.

“Thanks for the food.”

They all clasped their hands together and bowed before Scarlet suggested they go out to town and do some ‘research’.

Or was Scarlet excuse to go and watch other people training.

Every time they go out, people would always look their way. Crimson wondered if it were the fact that Scarlet was from a prestigious clan, and his clan symbol must have been an attention drawer. Scarlet seemed to be used to all this though, as he continued to babble with them like they were talking about the weather.

“I know a place we can kill two birds with one stone-“ Crimson brain racked to translate that proverbs, “walking on water is a good practice for chakra reserve and focusing the chakra to the feet will sharpen our focus.”

Scarlet seemed to know a lot, Crimson wondered if he had gotten a head start in the ninja business.

“Okay, lead the way then.” Midnight said with a nod and they all picked up the pace, Scarlet saying he knows a great waterfall for this training. Just as they closed in the area – Crimson could hear the calming sounds of water splashing – a strange feminine voice stopped them in their tracks.

“Opps, sorry but this place is taken already.” A blond girl appeared in front of them, staring down with a smirk on her face. Somehow, Crimson went into defensive mood and stood in front of Scarlet and Azure, Midnight doing the same.

“Fufufu~ Such cuties you all are.” She smirked. Behind her was a huge fan and Midnight glared when he saw not one but two village headband. Hidden Sand and Hidden Leaf.

A traitor? He thought.

“Fufufu. If you can beat me, I’ll let you pass through.” She said with a glitter in her eyes before she did a handsign and summoned not one, not two, but THREE shadow clones. Crimson could hear Azure gasped from behind him.

“Who are you and what do you want with us?” Midnight snarls as he drew out his sword.

“Fufufu, amateurs.” She smirked and drew out her fan. Everything was so fast. Crimson could feel the breeze against his face before the dust blinded his eyes and he knew the others were blinded too. There were movements around him and he heard the clash of metal against metal. Was that Midnight?

“Regenerative Healing.”

Green chakra glows around him and he could finally see again, in time to see Scarlet aiming fire* at the mysterious ninja’s clones before they could attack them.

“Thank you, Azure.” Scarlet said to her and gave a thumb up but his eyes were focused on Midnight fighting with the girl. Midnight was slightly shaking, and Crimson remembers something about Lighting was weak against Wind.

He felt something tugging on his arm and was panicked that one of the girl clone had got him but it was Azure, who was shaking like a leaf. He saw how much she was suppressing it though and he felt something bubbling inside him. His friends- no, his family- was in danger!

“Not yet!” Crimson shouts and almost naturally, he summoned a shield to Midnight, Scarlet and Azure.

He saw the girl was surprised, as she started to back away, disappearing into the high trees.

“Hmm, certainly exceeded my expectation.”

“Oi! *, don’t run away!” Midnight growls and was ready to run up to her but Scarlet grabbed his shoulder and s* his head. It was enough time for her to flee and she did, but not before saying “When we meet again next time, I hope it will be on better terms.” She smirked and disappeared like the wind.

There was an eerie silence around them before Midnight snapped at Scarlet.

“Why did you stopped me?!” He turned to face the boy, shoving the hand on his shoulder off. Scarlet held his gaze though, unfazed by the anger in front of him.

“She isn’t worth you getting injured.”

“I’m not injured, * it! She was hurting all of us!”

“Even if you have your Lightning Armor, it doesn’t mean you’re invincible.” Scarlet said calmly. “If you chase after her, you’re only falling for her trap. Beside,” he frowned, “We’re stronger when we * with each other.”

It seemed Scarlet had struck a spot, as Midnight was breathing really heavily. But he isn’t fighting back now, and seemed to be accepting Scarlet words.

“I’m… sorry.” Midnight muttered quietly, suddenly ashamed of himself. Scarlet smiled, but his smile was crooked, and his eyes were also glossy.

He pulled Midnight into a tight hug, and ushered the other two also. So they stood there, hugging each other tightly for dear life, after an experience that could have torn them apart.

Azure wasn’t shaking anymore, but she was crying now.

Crimson also learned that he could shield others now, and he’s determining to get better.

They were age 10 and 9 respectively and certainly not a Genin yet, but they know they could take on anything if they have each other.
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On 2017-03-28 21:36:32Show this Author Only
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Very interesting and satisfying to read ^^ Especially with you slowly incorporating all the main character's skills inside was something unique that I haven't seen before. :)
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:O ooh, Breeze has two headbands? *goes into deep thinking mode*
veeeeery interesting... ;P
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  • PoisonScrub On 2017-03-28 21:36:32
  • Very interesting and satisfying to read ^^ Especially with you slowly incorporating all the main character's skills inside was something unique that I haven't seen before. :)
Thank You!
Aw I'm glad you noticed that xD I was trying to use all the available info we have about the 5 mains, which isn't that much. And I like to think that since in the game the skill will only unlock as the level gets higher, then as they grow and become a better ninja < like Chunnin > they'll be able to use the 4th skill.

Or my attempt not to put to much BS about the whole ninja thingy
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  • MisakiFuuji On 2017-03-29 04:56:19
  • :O ooh, Breeze has two headbands? *goes into deep thinking mode*
    veeeeery interesting... ;P
Thank you!
Hohohoho breezy has 2 headbands hmmm why hmmm *wiggles eyebrow*
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