I think you should put Hinata instead of Kakashi and Kakashi instead of Sasuke because Kakashi is more dps than tank and Hinata is perfect tank to lightning main (in my opinion)
It would be in theory a nice combination, put i don't think it would work beacuse of the lack of combo> Also i think Sasuke and Kakashi will work better because of Kakashi's clone protecting Sasuke :)