I don't have sus Sasuke so I can't try out this team, but I can say a few things that in my opinion could do with a little improvement.

1st, if you are going with lightning blitz, shouldn't you buff your main? In this team the only buff you get is from MB passive and barrier which you can't rely on anyway. in this case Madara founder and/or Iruka would be a better replacement for Sasuke and/or Itachi.

2nd, since you don't have full buff on MB, it is unlikely that you can kill anyone in turn 1, unless you are heavily stacked. That's why it is better to have a pos 1 ninja with a combo starting mystery, so swap place between MB and Sasuke.

3rd, Idk if Sus Sasuke is a sword ninja. If he is you are leaving one of your ninja without immunity, and you don't have a reliable debuff remover. No heal or leech either. I don't think this team is safe enough.

4th, this is more of a personal preference, but no turn 1 control or interrupt makes a team more... vulnerable? Also, I can't tell who is the main damage dealer here, so on who are you putting your best gear?