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[ Fanfiction ] Midnight x Azure Part 6 "The birth of the ninja in unlimited power"

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Previously

Midnight: Do you have the gourd?

Scarlet: Yes...

Tsunade: Go see Ashura ... He can help you ...

Crimson: OK

Inoichi: Master Tsunade we have bad news...

Tsunade: What....?! Shizune... you have to prevent them ...

Shizune: But how?

Part 1: https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/page/show-post-41218-1.html

Part 2: https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/page/show-post-41368-1.html

Part 3: https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/page/show-post-41405-1.html

Part 4: https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/page/show-post-41839-1.html

Part 5: https://forum-narutoen.oasgames.com/page/show-post-42328-1.html

The sun sets

Scarlet: Leave me 5 minutes, I have to go into sage mode to be able to imprison a demon

Midnight: Meanwhile, we hold him back

Overlord: I am not in my initial form, my ultimate form and this body does not have enough energy for me to be the most powerful.I need a new body...

Breeze: Wind Style Vac* Blast Barrage

Midnight: Lightning Style Chidori Stream

Azure: Water Style Water Dragon Style

Overlord: It's time to see what I can do

Arrived at Konoha Cliff

Crimson: Where is he?

Ashura: Hi Crimson

Crimson *turned around

Overlord: You are too weak ...

Midnight *smile: You think....

Scarlet: Sage Art Sealing Jutsu Sealing the demon

Overlord: What...

Scarlet: Ahhhhhhhh...

Overlord *smile: It's time...

Scarlet *tired and falls down: I succeeded

Ino: Scarlet answer me quickly ... it's extremely serious...

Scarlet: What is it?

Ino: Overlord can change body until it is in its ultimate form...Scarlet ... Surely one of them in Overlord in him

Scarlet: How to recognize him?

Ino: Whoever has eyes in purple

Scarlet: It means that...

Midnight *smile

Breeze/Azure: Scarlet...!

Midnight(Overlord): Chidori Sharp Spear...

Scarlet: Urh...

Midnight: Hahahaha...

Breeze *Run to him: Midnight why did you do that ?!

Scarlet: Breeze...DO NOT APPROACH YOU!!!

Breeze: Why...?!

Midnight: do not worry, you will join him in paradise

Scarlet: Go away ... THIS IS NOT MIDNIGHT,IT'S....OVERLORD !!!

Breeze: What...?!!

Midnight *throw his sword: DIE!!!

Crimson: Earth Style Stone Wall

Scarlet: Crimson...

Midnight: A new one has come

Crimson *smile: I did not come alone...

Ashura: Hi everyone we did not come at the wrong time

Breeze: But...It's...

Crimson: Yeah...it's Ashura...

Midnight blurted Scarlet

Azure: Big Brother...

Ashura: Go heal Scarlet we take care of Overlord

Midnight: I'll see what I can do with this body before my ultimate form

Ashura: You're ready?

Crimson: Yeah

Midnight: So...Let's go...

Crimson/Ashura/Midnight: DISAPPEARS!!

*Explosion

Azure: Avoid moving Scarlet

Breeze: I protect you

Scarlet: Thanks

Azure: No need to thank us it's our job


Midnight: Enough to play ... you can see yourself in the afterlife....Lightning Style Giant Black Energy Ball

Ashura: You know what you have to do...

Crimson: Wood Style: Wooden Dragon Jutsu...

Midnight: You think this attack will prevent your destruction

Crimson: No...But...

Ashura *above Midnight: Sage Art:

Sealing Jutsu

Midnight: What...!

Ashura: That's the problem when you're in a human body ... We can be paralyzed

Midnight: Your friends will die by this attack...

Ashura: No...Shadow Clone Jutsu

Ashura/Ashura (Clones): SAGE ART PORTAL

*Explosion (on the other side of the destroyed mountain)

Scarlet: Now what do we do?

Crimson: Scarlet...You are healed...And the injury you had ...

Scarlet: Azure did it all

Azure: Yes...Ashura do you know how to remove Overlord from the Midnight body

Ashura: Yes but there is risk

Breeze: What do you mean?

Ashura: Overlord will remove all the energy from your friend

Azure: ...

Ashura: So...What is your choice?

Scarlet: He will stay alive?

Ashura: Yes...But Overlord will be in its ultimate form ...

Breeze: We are ready to take the risk that....I want to see my brother again

Ashura: OK...So stay away

Crimson: Come with me

Azure: OK

Ashura: Shadow Clone Jutsu (*Five clones appeared)

Ashura (Clone 3): Let's go

Ashura (Clone 1) : Yeah

Azure: I hope that will get away

Scarlet: Yes

Ashura/All Ashura Clone: SAGE ART ASHURA STYLE RELEASE OF THE FEROCIOUS BEAST

Midnight *Shout: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ashura: We can do it

*Two clones have disappeared

Midnight: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

*An aura comes out of Midnight's mouth

Overlord: Finally...

Ashura: This is the worst that happens

Breeze: I'm afraid of losing it...

Midnight *fall

Ashura: There it's done

Overlord: I thank you

Ashura: Overlord...

Overlord *Open your eyes and the ground collapses

Azure: So that's his ultimate form

Midnight: What's going on...

Azure: Midnight...

Ashura: Rest where you are

Azure: W....Why?

Ashura: Do not ask any questions

Overlord: Die...Ball of Death

Ashura *takes Midnight create a portal and teleport behind Crimson

*The death bullet destroys the west side of the forest

Ashura: Azure heals Midnight

Azure: OK

Ashura: Crimson...

Crimson: Yes...

Ashura: The parchment

Crimson: What...Ohh yes the parchment

Scarlet: This is another way of imprisoning Overlord

Ashura: No...He will be able to destroy it

Breeze: What...

Azure: There it's done

Midnight *open your eyes

Azure *blushed

Midnight: What are you doing with me...?

Azure *all red: It's not what you think

Breeze: Hahaha....So Azure...

Azure *blushed: No No....

Midnight *looked at Azure

Breeze: Yes Yes...

Midnight *looked at Breeze

Azure: No

Midnight *looked at Azure

Breeze: Yes

Midnight *looked at Breeze

Ashura: Enough

Overlord: Take all your time since you are all going to die

Ashura: ....

Azure *help Midnight to get up

Midnight: Thanks

Azure *blushed: No problem

Scarlet: what did you mean by "destroy"

Crimson: Master Tsunade gave me this roll because ...

Ashura: He wants you to merge...You Scarlet and you Midnight

Scarlet/Midnight: WHAT...?!

Ashura: The merge of Yin and Yang...A technique created by Kaguma Uzumaki

Midnight: And why me and Scarlet...

Ashura: Together, you have unlimited power of destruction, but the fusion is limited.

Scarlet: OK so let's go

Ashura: Scarlet,Midnight come with me

Midnight: OK

Scarlet: And Overlord...

Breeze: We occupy it

Scarlet: So be careful...

Breeze: Do not worry...

Scarlet *kissed Breeze

Breeze *blushed

Azure: So...

Breeze: No No

Azure: Hahaha

Scarlet: See you

Breeze: Yeah...

Azure: Here Midnight and my brother are gone

Overlord: I'll let you attack me first

Crimson: So let's go

Ashura: You are ready to merged ?

Midnight: Yes

Scarlet: Yes

Midnight: Yin...

Scarlet: Yang...

Midnight/Scarlet: MER...GE YAA

???: So...

Ashura *smile

Crimson: Wood Style True Deep Forest Création...Azure your turn

Azure: Yeah...Monster Strength....Breeze

Breeze: Shadow Clone Jutsu...Sage Art Massive Rasengan Mega Barrage

Crimson: We are a good team

Overlord: Yes...

Crimson/Azure/Breeze: WHAT...?!

Overlord: Who will I attack first...?

Yes...As it says women first

Breeze: WHAT?

Overlord *hit him and Breeze fell on a tree

Overlord: DIE!!!!Demon Blade

Breeze: (It's over for me...But in less I had time to be with the one I love ... To fight with him ...)

???: Lightning Style Lightning Tiger

Breeze: What...

???: As promised...

Breeze: Scarlet...

Overlord: A new one has joined us...Who are you?

???: I am the result of the fusion of Scarlet and Midnight my name is ScarletNight

Ashura: Sorry I'm late

Crimson: No problem

ScarletNight: Now, leave this place it will start to be dangerous

Azure: We will not leave you alone against this monster

Ashura: Azure he's right if we stay we can die

Azure: OK...

Breeze: Good Luck

Azure: See you brother and Mid

ScarletNight: Bye...

Overlord: ....

ScarletNight *the hair starts to whiten : Now everything is going on between you and me...

Overlord: Disappears

ScarletNight: No...you Disappears

Overlord: Ahhh

ScarletNight: Ahhh

*Explosion

TO BE CONTINUED


FANART SCARLETNIGHT

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Thanks to Azure Blade and Scarlet Blaze for the fanart


Next chapter: THE END OF THE FIGHT?


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On 2019-09-21 00:11:05Show this Author Only
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No problem bro and Awesome

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Beautiful No problem bro

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Yay !! New chap XD XD XD XD XD

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Awesome

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Yin Yang MER...GE YAAH xD

Great Job

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Hey, let me take your fanfic and send it to the Spanish and French Forum

Because your fanfic is really

2F12A771-D7AB-488F-B329-A4CBDBBE3335

Since the first chapter

Thanks again

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New chap in 3 weeks




This post was last edited by •影 ZkSëñkøxÑ 火• on 2019-09-21 22:26:25.
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Awesome Super Fanfics...Great Job

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  • Azure Blade On 2019-09-21 00:11:05
  • No problem bro and Awesome

Thanks again :)

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  • ScarletBlaze476 On 2019-09-21 00:12:43
  • Beautiful No problem bro

Thanks

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  • IndraBlaze24 On 2019-09-21 00:17:44
  • AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING

THANKS THANKS THANKS

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  • Hina Devil On 2019-09-21 01:14:45
  • Yay !! New chap XD XD XD XD XD

XD XD XD THANKS




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  • Sasuke Uchiha ( On 2019-09-21 16:01:31
  • Awesome

Yeah THANK YOU

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  • I'm Vegetto On 2019-09-21 17:53:37
  • Yin Yang MER...GE YAAH xD

    Great Job

LOL Thanks again

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  • Gohan Kakarot On 2019-09-21 18:43:25
  • Hey, let me take your fanfic and send it to the Spanish and French Forum

    Because your fanfic is really

    2F12A771-D7AB-488F-B329-A4CBDBBE3335

    Since the first chapter

    Thanks again

You have my permission

Thanks again

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  • Midnight BLD On 2019-09-21 23:33:18
  • Awesome Super Fanfics...Great Job

Thank you

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On 2019-09-23 02:44:21Show this Author Only
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TBH there is small amount of misspelling and no interpunctions in some lines.


BUT! ... the story is interesting and I think it needs to contain at least 10 chapters cuz it's just too short to be finished just in few chapters.


Great lines of the characters and you have ten points from me for those jutsu names


Don't stop evolve


Keep it that way.



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  • ⛧Akuma⛧ On 2019-09-23 02:44:21
  • TBH there is small amount of misspelling and no interpunctions in some lines.


    BUT! ... the story is interesting and I think it needs to contain at least 10 chapters cuz it's just too short to be finished just in few chapters.


    Great lines of the characters and you have ten points from me for those jutsu names


    Don't stop evolve


    Keep it that way.



That's why the next chapter is "THE END OF THE FIGHT?" with a question mark

My fanfic has 12 chapters

Thanks again bro

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