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Typo Searching Contest - Returning Back to Konoha

Event Period: From March 4th to March 17th

Jiraiya

Hello, Everyone!

We have been a ninja family for quite a while now, and we have lost many members along the way. Things have changed in their time away, including new characters to play with! Unfortunately, not every ninja has had their orders issued to them correctly! We need your help to correct the grammar and spelling errors in their descriptions!


How to Play:

Players who are interested in participating in this event must complete several requirements.

- You must be a group of TWO people, a partnership, to celebrate the return of your partner back to the game!
- Both partners must EACH choose one ninja from their ninja list.
- These ninjas must be different for each partner, and once someone has used a ninja, no one else may use that ninja! Example: Now that Tachi has used Regular Naruto, no one else may use him!
- Each partner will submit one screenshot EACH of their ninja interface (see example below) which also shows server name, time, date, and their main’s character portrait on the left. This screenshot must also show that you own the ninja you are attempting to correct!
- Each partner will then submit one screenshot EACH of the ninja description they wish to correct for grammar and spelling errors (see example below).
- Each partner will then provide a typed-up correction of what ninja’s description, correcting as many grammar and spelling mistakes as they can find!
- Finally, be sure to include BOTH players’ In Game Names, Regions, Server IDs, and UIDs (found here).

Reward:
- Three pairs of winners will be chosen!
- Entries will be scored based upon the number of mistakes found, the number of mistakes missed, and the overall complexity of the original descriptions that are chosen!
- Winners will receive 3,000 coupons per pairing/partnership; or 1,500 coupons per person! That's a total of 9,000 coupons for the event!

Reminders:

- You should have a total of two screenshots in your entry: One showing your ninja interface with your main character and the ninja you are correcting, and a second with the ninja’s description!
- Each player should only make one post!
- No copying other players’ posts, or you will be disqualified!
- All submissions for this contest will be placed as suggestions for items that need to be corrected in-game.
- To be clear, both players must submit their own, separate characters, not the same character twice.
- No duplicate characters allowed!
- Players must submit the entire skill description, not a screenshot of a website displaying the description, and not a partial skill description.
- Please use images from the game and not from external sources.
- You are correcting spelling and grammar errors, NOT errors in the ninja's usage (I.e., regular Naruto should cause certain hit, but does not state this). If you wish to correct this as well, you may, but this is not a requirement of this contest.
- If you want to use a ninja that has been skillbroken, that is fine, but do not use just the skillbreaks themselves!

Example:

Ninja Description: Hashirama Senju [New Year]
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Proof of Recruitment for TylerMotoki (Note how I show my character name on the left and still show the character owned on the right):

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(See that we used two separate characters, as is required by the event, and that we each individually posted our own corrections)

Corrected Description: (We both included the fully corrected descriptions, hand-typed, by us. Showing us correcting grammar and spelling mistakes found in the descriptions.)
Sage Art - Gate of the Great God [Prompt]: Causes 8 combo and Suppression of Immunity to Debuff to up to 2 units. The targeted team's chakra limit is reduced to 60. The selected target suffers from Immobile lasting until the end of the next round.
Lion Toss: Attacks 3-4 targets of the opponent's team and causes 3 Combo with a high chance to cause Knockdown and Enfeeble to 1 random target.
New Year - Dancing Dragon: Chases and attacks a Knocked Down unit, causing Low Float. The target's Mystery Skill Chakra will be increased by 20. This lasts until the end of the round.
Peace Prayer: At the start of each round, heals self and a random allied Ninja and removes all Debuffs. Also gain 1 extra Chase this round for both targets.
Sennin: Hashirama Senju is immune to Debuffs. Whenever receiving an attack, this unit recovers 2% of total Health.


My In-Game Name: TylerMotoki
My Region: LA (Please be sure to post your region, as asked for in this post.)
My Server: S14
My UID: 9999999 (Please post the UID found in the link above.)

My Partner's Name: Tachi
My Partner's Region: LA
My Partner's Server: S14
My Partner's UID: 0000000


Good luck, and have fun!

Naruto Online Operations Team




This post was last edited by Tachibana Saeko on 2021-03-06 15:09:28.
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Example of How to Play!

Original Description: Naruto

Naruto

Proof of Recruitment for Tachi:
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Description Correction:
Shadow Clone Jutsu [Prompt]: Generates1 Shadow Clone. The Shadow Clone's attributes are subject to Naruto's original attributes.
Taijutsu Attack: Attacks the opponent's front row and has a chance of 3 COMBO and Low Float.
*y Jutsu: Used at the beginning of a battle, lower the Resistance of up to 4 Male units of the opponent's field.
Shadow Clone Barrage: When you have a Shadow Clone, your Standard Attack will be replaced by a combo attack between Naruto and his Shadow Clone(s). This attack is Certain Hit and causes Low Float.

My Name: Tachi
My Server: S14
My ID: 00000000
My Region:
LA

My Partner's Name: TylerMotoki
My Partner's Server: S000
My Partner's ID 9999999
My Partner's Region:
LA

Please keep in mind that BOTH players should submit corrections like this!!
You must list which player you are linked with to get credit!




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Winners for this specific event!

Tedi〤 and MiayaMito

Iris and Kamui

Blitz and PirateLancer


Congratulations, everyone, and thank you for participating!




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This post was last edited by HatsuneMikuu on 2021-03-05 01:57:26.
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Original Description: Jiraiya [Young Adult]

Screenshot 2021-03-04 at 10

Proof of Recruitment for Crystal:

Screenshot 2021-03-06 at 1


Description Correction:

*Summoning Justsu - Gamachu [Prompt]: Causes damage and low float to a selected opponents unit, and suppress immunity, (last until the end of the round). At this time if the opponent recovers immunity, it will cancel all of it's debuffs.

Taijutsu Attack: Attacks up to 3 units of the opponent's front row, and has a chance of causing repulse. This skill is not affected by any protective skills of the opponent.

Summoning Jutsu - Gamaken: Chases and attacks a repulsed unit, causes knockdown. Can be triggered up to 2 times each round.

Toad Oil Bomb: Triggered with at least 30 combo, causes damage and slowdown to 2 units of the opponent's lineup.

*Summoning Jutsu - Gamabunta Slash Combo: Have your team have 100 chakra points, then choose a target. This skill will replace standard attack with Summoning Jutsu and summon Gamabunta, which will use short sword slash and will cause heavy damage. As well as tag and repulse to the unit in front Gamabunta, and 2 other units of the opponent's formation. This skill is not affected by any protective skills of the opponent.


UID Ninja 1: 300004904348363

SID Ninja 1: S1338 Ice Darts Jutsu l NY

IGN Ninja 1: Crystal

UID Ninja 2: 300030967348994

SID Ninja 2: S1326 Four Fingered Assault l NY

IGN Ninja 2: Spookz




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This post was last edited by Mitsuki7272 on 2021-03-05 12:27:08.
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Original Description: Lee [Great Ninja War]

Screenshot 2021-03-06 at 1

Proof of Recruitment for Spookz:

Screenshot 2021-03-06 at 1

Description Correction:

*Eight Inner Gates [Prompt]: Launches 3 standard attacks in the round this skill is used, simultaneously. Will also increase this unit's critical rate by 15%. Last for 1 round

Konoha Hurricane: Attacks a maximum of 3 units of the opponent's front row, and has a chance of causing repulse.

Primary Lotus: Chases and attacks a high floated unit, causes knockdown and ignition.

Leaf Hurricane Whirlwinds: Chases and attacks a knockdown, causes high float.

Dying Awareness: The lower the life of this unit, the higher the combo rate.

UID Ninja 1: 300030967348994

SID Ninja 1: S1326 Four Fingered Assault l NY

IGN Ninja 1: Spookz

UID Ninja 2: 300004904348363

SID Ninja 2: S1338 Ice Darts Jutsu l NY

IGN Ninja 2: Crystal




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Hello!
It seems that there has been a little bit of confusion. To be clear, you both need to post and edit separate ninjas, not the same ninja. Otherwise there would be no point in having you both do it, I think. I've edited the post to make that a little more clear and added a second example! Hopefully that clears it up!

Also, please remember that your proof of recruitment should show your character portrait on the left so that it actually shows that you're on your account! Similar to how my example shows my main on the left.

Thanks! ^_^

P.S. If there are further questions, please feel free to DM TylerMotoki or me. Try to keep the thread clear of conversations and limited to contest entries only. And do please try to avoid making extra, unnecessary posts in the future. Thank you!




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Original Description: Iruka[Suit]

Screenshot_89

Proof of Recruitment for Aniki:

Screenshot_90

Description Correction: Only mystery have a wrong description below is the correct description.


Loop Test[Prompt]: Causes damage, Interruption, and no cheating for 2 rounds if chosen an enemy unit.

If you choose *ly unit gives immunity to debuffs and an extra standard attack for 2 rounds.

Battle Cooldown : 0 Cooldown : 2 Chakra Cost : 20


All other skills have correct descriptions and work as intended.

My Name: Aniki
My Server: S1505
My ID:
300051462688743

My Partner's Name: Lactose
My Partner's Server: S1153
My Partner's ID:
300051462688743




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Original Description: Guy[Gate of joy] and above

Screenshot_91

Proof of Recruitment for Lactose:

Screenshot_94

Description Correction: At 3 stars passive description is wrong.


Guidance: When this unit is in the field, the Combo Rate and Attack of all the Konoha ninja in your team will be increased by 20%.


Description correction at 4 stars: Chase can be triggered twice and passive.


Super Primary Lotus: Chases and Attacks a High Floated unit, causes Low Float and Ignition. Can be triggered twice per round.

Hot blooded Guidance: When this unit is in the field, the Combo Rate and Attack of all the Konoha ninja in your team will be increased by 30%.




My Name: Lactose

My Server: S1153

My ID: 300051462688743

My Partner's Name: Aniki

My Partner's Server: S1505

My Partner's ID: 300051462688743




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Original description:Rock Lee (Shippuden).

Screenshot_20210307-225031

Proof of Recruitment for Oliver:Screenshot_20210307-225109

Description Correction: Only Mystery Skill have a wrong.

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With skillbreak he can lauch only 3 Standard Attacks after use Mystery Skill not 4.



My Name: Oliver

My Server: S1000

My UID: 200000089801372

My Partner's Name: Kira

My Partner's Server: S1012

My Partner's UID: 300050596222370

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Original Description/Skills Sasori[Edo Tensei]

Skill1

Proof Of Ownership

proof

Description Correction

Passive 2 :The Soul's Strength:

if this Unit is defeated, it will resurrect 2 rounds later with 30% of its original life points furthermore this unit passive skill Ambush force will be Reapplied and its mystery Cooldown will be reduced to 0

Previous Description

if this Unit is defeated, it will resurrect 2 rounds later with 30% of its original life points furthermore this unit prompt mystery skill will be activated once again.


My Name: Genesis
My Server: S440 Four Inferno
My UID:
200000102350961

My Region: UK


My Partner's Name: Liger
My Partner's Server: S440 Four Inferno
My Partner's ID :
200000093386478

My Partner's Region: UK






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Original Description Shisui Uchiha [Kimono]:
2Shisui

Correction of description:
Shisui has a high chance of evading any first attack of the round aswell reflects any Debuffs towards him. Moreover, every time Shisui triggers his chase skill, Shisui increases his Initiative by 0.5% and his Ninjutsu by 12%

Proof for Scaredy'Cat:

Shisui

Me:
Region and Server: Europe / S1049 - Rotation of Heaven and Earth
In-game Name: BattleCrier
UID: 200000087523216

My partner:

Region and Server: Europe / S1049 - Rotation of Heaven and Earth
In-game Name: Scaredy´Cat
UID: 300026817929964

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Original description Kankuro:
Kankuro
Correction of description:
The unit causing Taijutsu damage to this unit receives Poisoning effect.

Proof for BattleCrier:
Kankuro2

Me:

Region and Server: Europe / S1049 - Rotation of Heaven and Earth
In-game Name: Scaredy´Cat
UID: 300026817929964

My partner:

Region and Server: Europe / S1049 - Rotation of Heaven and Earth
In-game Name: BattleCrier
UID: 200000087523216

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Ninja Description: Shikamaru[Great Ninja War]

SHIKMARU

Proof of Recruitment for Tedi〤(泰迪)

TEDI

Corrected Description:

Shadow Strangulation Jutsu [Prompt]: Causes a small amount of damage and Immobile to a selected unit. After using it for 2 times, it will start to Cooldown for 4 rounds.

Shadow Stitching Jutsu: Attacks the opponent's front row and has a chance of causing Knockdown and Immobile.

Shadow Stitching Jutsu-Shadow Claw: Chases and Attacks a Repulsed unit and causes Knockdown and Immobile.

Konoha's Counsellor: Before the first move of each round, it will increase 20 Chakra points.

War Tactics: At the beginning of a battle, increases Ninjutsu and Attack of up to 9 units of the Allied Shinobi Forces in your formation by 30%. This lasts for 5 rounds.


Region and ServerID: HK S328 -:Laser Circus

In-Game Name: Tedi〤(泰迪)

UID: 200000097405077


Region and ServerID: HK S328 -:Laser Circus

In-Game Name: MiayaMito

UID: 300024751064354




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Ninja Description: Ino[Great Ninja War]

MIAYIMITO DEsc<x>riptION

Proof of Recruitment for MiayaMito

MIAYAMITO PROOF

Corrected Description:

Mind-Transmission Clone [Prompt]-Causes damage and Chaos to a selected unit. If Shikamaru is also in your Lineup, this skill will cause Chaos to 1 more unit.

Double Healing Jutsu: Heal 2 units with the least Life points and cancel also 1 Debuff suffered by a selected unit.

Forbidden Flower: At the beginning of a battle, increases the Ninjutsu and Attack of all Secret Technique attribute units in your team by 30%. This lasts up to 3 rounds.

Mind-Transmission Jutsu: Chases and Attacks an Immobile or Chases and Attacks a Sleeping unit and causes Chaos. It can be triggered twice each round. (While suffering from Chaos Debuff, a unit will attack 1 unit of its line up for 1 round).

Battle Meister: Every time this unit triggers a Chase Skill, this unit will recover 15 Chakra points.



Region and ServerID: HK S328 -:Laser Circus

In-Game Name: MiayaMito

UID: 300024751064354


Region and ServerID: HK S328 -:Laser Circus

In-Game Name: Tedi〤(泰迪)

UID: 200000097405077




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Ninja Description: Sasuke [Susano'o]

SDSasuke

Proof of Recruitment for Blitz:

PoRSasuke

Corrected Description:

Mystery [Prompt]: Susano'o (TAI/NIN):

Causes unavoidable damage to all units in the opponent's lineup and cause Repulse to the selected unit. This skill has a 75% chance to cause Critical Hit with 1.5x critical damage.


Standard: Chidori Blade (TAI/NIN - Lightning Elemental Damage):

Attacks the opponent's front row and has a chance to cause 3 Combo and Low Float.


Passive: Super Armor - Susano'o (NIN):

This unit is immune to Low Float, High Float, Repulse, Knockdown and Pure Ninjutsu.


Chase 1: Susano'o - Attack (TAI/NIN - Fire Elemental Damage):

Triggered with atleast 10 Combos, causes Fire attribute Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage to 2 random units on the opponent's field. This skill is always a Critical Hit.


Chase 2: Inferno Style - Flame Control (NIN):

Chases and Attacks a Low Floated unit, causes High Float and Ignition that will last for 3 rounds.


*Note: Wanted to do something extra, so those highlighted in Bold and Underline are corrections for ninja usage*


My In-Game Name: Blitz

My Region: HK

My Server: S343 - Blade Dance

My UID: 200000098175914


My Partner's In-Game Name: PirateLancer

My Partner's Region: HK

My Partner's Server: S343 - Blade Dance

My Partner's UID: 200000103561875




This post was last edited by xBlitz on 2021-03-13 10:56:00.
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Ninja Description: Toroi [Edo Tensei]

SDToroi

Proof of Recruitment for PirateLancer:

PoRToroi

Corrected Description:

Mystery: Magnet Style - Conserving Bee Twin Blades [Prompt]: Causes a selected unit to suffer from Paralysis, Immobile, and Low Float. If the selected unit is already suffering from Paralysis, this unit's Mystery Cooldown time will be reduced by 1.

Standard Attack: Shuriken Attack: Attacks the opponent's unit in the front row and has a chance to cause Repulse and 10 Combo.

Chase: Angular Shuriken: Chases and Attacks a Low Floated unit, causes Repulse and Paralysis.

Passive 1: Magnet Style - Magnetized Armor: Before each action of this unit, generates a shield for this unit and a random lightning attribute unit in your lineup based on 20% of this unit's resistance. Can be triggered twice in a round.

Passive 2: Magnet Style - Magnetization: Every lightning attribute unit in your lineup with a shield will have its Ninjutsu and Attack increased by 20%.


My In-Game Name: PirateLancer

My Region: HK

My Server: S343 - Blade Dance

My UID: 200000103561875


My Partner's In-Game Name: Blitz

My Partner's Region: HK

My Partner's Server: S343 - Blade Dance

My Partner's UID: 200000098175914

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Ninja Description: Pain-Gakido

Ekran Görüntüsü (36)

Proof of Recruitment for キラKira:

Ekran Görüntüsü (39)

Ekran Görüntüsü (38)

Original passive: when this ninja is on the field,all rinnegan units gain %40 increase resistance.

Ekran Görüntüsü (43)

Technically speaking, he needs to work passively because he's standing on the field. But his passive doesn't work when the ninja dies

Description Correction

Passive - Rinnegan-Resist : As long as this ninja survives, all rinnegan units gain 40% resistance.


just me

UID: 300030109092875

Server ID: S1444 IGN : Power of Six Paths

In-game name: キラKira

My friend

UID: 300060354260353

Server ID: S1452 IGN : Wind Style Chakra Blades

In-game name: MikaiSusaTR





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