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[ Fanfiction ] Fight Against Pain: Student vs Student (Rating T)

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On 2018-05-04 12:47:29Show All Posts
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Tension is rising... graaaaavity hurts-

Nicely done!

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On 2018-05-08 07:45:59Show All Posts
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  • ShadowLordZero On 2018-05-04 19:35:40
  • A very good fanfic, but, if you don't find, although not trying to be rude, your grammar is quite atrocious, would you like me to rewrite it, making everything make more sense? I will of course credit you, and make adjustments and additions where needed to make it better, I hope you accept my help, and I can make your fanfic very well written indeed

~~Nice copypaste.~~


I can't help but get weird vibes from this tbh, it makes me susp1cious.




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On 2018-05-08 09:08:46Show All Posts
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  • Naked Snake On 2018-05-08 08:53:45
  • I asked him to show me some of the "atrocious grammar" I have. He didn't respond.

Maybe I'm being paranoid or dumb here. But what he's saying sounds like an advertis3ment.



"I will of course credit you, and make adjustments and additions where needed to make it better"



I feel like he's trying to get your permission to reprint your story somewhere else, then he can say he had permission to in small text.



"I hope you accept my help, and I can make your fanfic very well written indeed"



Sounds like an advert, I think. That said, I might be ridiculously wrong, but the fact that he copied and pasted the exact same message, plus all of this, makes me feel susp1cious.

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