Well, I hate you now Tiami. xD

Payback for Hinata death muahahahaha

I hate myself for that too, don't worry x) True is that there's a secret second part aka plot-twist for that but after typing down this part I decided to leave it like this. It just perfectly go with my mood from past week

Real tempted to make a reply to this with Crimson Fist finding out about this and beating Midnight to a pulp..

That would be well deserved for that wittle *! His next target is our beloved Azure, someone has to stop him and deliver justice

Ooh, I like this.

This story match whole this anniversary time way better than my fanart event's entry, I think. I'm glad you like ^.^ /crying internally/

Nice! I personally like how you made Midnight out of all people be the traitor, he seems somewhat fitting for that role compared to the others.

This...kinda corraborates my own version of Midnight, in which he's a part of Root. And that was a long time ago, dang it!

Remember, you asked for this..

Through the evening air follows a familiar voice, a deep yet - friendly tone.

"Yo! Scarlet, I got those weight I sugg-" He's met with the sight of blood. The grim image of a body limp in the hands on the unthinkable. Rigor mortis steadily claimed over the body of Scarlet as his appearance causes a shadowed face to whip over their shoulder.

"Man did you come at a back time," says Midnight, whipping his blade to the side as he stood. It paints the cobblestone like an amuteur painter.

Crimson shakes, both visibly and mentally. The image won't go away--no, this betrayal. "No, this is a genjutsu! Who's doing this?!" he barks.

"Genjutsu? I wouldn't think a rock could be to assuming. Then again, you never took me as the smart type." Says Midnight. He begins to steadily approach Crimson.

Crimson's eye narrow, muscles showing prominence. There's a deep grunt with bared teeth, he grinds his molars together as he silently leers at his so-called companion.

Midnight stands spaces away from Crimson with a sly smirk, his gestures and mannerisms suggest a sinister playfulness to them. "Come on big guy, don't look at me like that. Here," he pauses whilst looking for for the briefest of moments, eye reflecting over the glimmering blade of his stained in blood. "You can join him!" He suddenly lashes out, whipping his blade with a wicked arc across Crimson's broad chest.

"Gyk!" Crimson's too slow to properly defend himself, yet he's sturdy enough to withstand the *. With a narrow slit marred over his chest, clothing ripped and bloodied red, he clenched his fist whilst a hand laid over the wound. "How--How could you? How could you do this? We're supposed to be friends!"

Midnight wastes no time for idle chit-chat, a man of action. He vanishes from sight, leaving a luminescent spark in his prior position as he appears behind Crimson like the reaper of death, whispering into his ear before a stroke of his blade cleaves towards his back. "You've all had to die sometime.."

An expression of shock plasters Crimson's face at the sight of signature movement, a seemingly time-splitting moment to catch sight of what's behind. No, he won't be caught off guard this time. Before the blade sought to reap, he snags Midnight by his scrawny wrist, throwing him onto the cobblestone with strength well enough to cause a lesser crater upon impact.

Shamed, Midnight spurts blood from the impact and does his best to regain his position with bolts of lightning transitioning him from point A to B.He falls to a knee while an arm hugs his stomach. Despite the pain he grins, his blade aimed in Crimson's direction. "You're going to make this worth while.."

Crimson stands resolute, arms up with his cladded arm-guards shimmering from the blazing sun. There's a look in his eyes, an ire. This person before him was no friend, but an enemy.

---To be continued???

/bows down/ thank you for a good read, this is absolutely great and I'm honoured that my fic got continuation like this. Althou, originaly I had a "part two" for it and way different- I wonder if I should post it

They said if it's not finished, it doesn't count. I think?

It is finished at this point when it comes to that version of it- means, the "dark" version. It is FINISHED! Just- there's other version I hold in my notebook and might add the "secret part" but not as part of event entry

EDIT: I changed my mind xD gotta add a bit to original post. Will it count to event or not- meh, whatever, I just want to share with you guys x) [Midnighty forced me to... "You guys giving me a bad name now, sigh..."]

Well Tiami, first part was Scary as *. But the second part was

Nice fan fiction :D

1YA for you :D

Thank you, I'm glad you like ^^ It supposed to end on Scarly part but... I can't really kill poor little Scarlet T^T

if you kill little scarlet, I will kill you first to avoid that happen Tiami~

I thought Midnight joined the Akatsuki there for a second! But man, this was a pretty good read! Good job!

I will make them all join Akatsuki anyway

1) Reply with a comment "1YA" on the thread.

since this * "rule" is a thing, there your go 1YA.

Dunno how only comment like that count as a point so all other comments that says "i like it, it's nice" won't count.

But i guess it's oasis way to do thing, the wrong way, as per usual xD

Anyway 1Ya, that's my vote

Thanks anyway ^^'